Reply With QuoteNice job on the Shocker himself. The suit especially. Nice angle... cool Spiderman in the background.
Hope you go back and fix the buildings. Definitely distracts from an otherwise really good drawing.
Drawing of shocker I did for spidey villian draw off.
c&c please.
by the by. I know the background sucks and is way off. but comment about that too.
Nice job on the Shocker himself. The suit especially. Nice angle... cool Spiderman in the background.
Hope you go back and fix the buildings. Definitely distracts from an otherwise really good drawing.
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this is a high level of awesome.
The shocker's outfit is superb ... the mattressy padding material looks like it could take a beating and still protect him from his vibration blast thingies, the metal looks rigid and steel-like, and those hands are outstanding!
I know with the angle you have him at, the body will get smaller as it gets closer to the vanishing point, but I think his left thigh could be a bit thinner.
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The building on the viewer's left is muffed up, but you knew that.
I really like this. Well done.
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Very nice fabric rendering, dynamic posing, very interesting foreshortening... I can tell you've worked on that right-side hand!
Keep it up!!
Love the perspective and shocks costume!!
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its pretty good, like you said the buildings are teh biggets problem, remember all points should be going to a vanishing point. the vanishing points are like the sun and all the lines in that plane are rays coming from it. so you can see how all lines as they get higher from the vanishing point would have greater angles, if you look at say the window and the roof and the window and it self you can see that the angles arent consistently changing.
ok no one can make sense of that maybe ill do a pic or something. other than that the figures look pretty strong
pretty cool man, Nice and clean. Spidey mask is off...??? you see that charlie
yeah yeah draw over my drawing. Its too late to update it for the draw off but i plan on inking it and I'd like to redo the background. SO, if you could help me out with a couple things.
1. With shockers angle being what it is (worms eye view) Where would the horizon line fall?
2. Would this be considered a 2 point perspective or a 3 point?
You have a future in comics! Keep up the good work. The only negative thing I can say about the piece is that the right arm seems just a little off.
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