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    Bats and Di

    Just a fun sketch that I recently inked.
    Following the advice of Trevor Nielson from "Supernatural Law", I returned to the brush on this one.

    Especially after I got dogged for coloring on a thin-line ink drawing in the coloring section, so I thought I'd return to the thicker style with the brush and see where it got me.

    I'll probably color it later.
    Enjoy...

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    Nice job!!!!
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    Not bad! there's three things that look off to me though.One is that your noses are too flat and smooshed they almost look like there's a sheet of glass between em and they're pressing their faces against it. WW face is a bit to compressed verticaly (her eyes and nose are too far down). And WW's chest looks more like pecks rather than female breasts.
    -Tuefelkind

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tuefelkind View Post
    Not bad! there's three things that look off to me though.One is that your noses are too flat and smooshed they almost look like there's a sheet of glass between em and they're pressing their faces against it. WW face is a bit to compressed verticaly (her eyes and nose are too far down). And WW's chest looks more like pecks rather than female breasts.
    Thanks for the comments.
    I deliberatley went away from the Wonder Woman as sex kitten image to work the Amazon Warrior angle, because i thought it would be funnier.

    I also went with big hair on WW intentionally (ala Dolly Parton) to play up her Amazonian roots, again for humorous effect. This is what makes you feel like her eyes/nose are too far down.

    The nose thing I agree could be less flat, but I don't agree that they look like they are pushed up against glass. I wanted a Greek aquiline shaped nose for her. Bats' is too short, though. No Grecian excuses there for me! LOL

    Finally, the boobs. Yes, they are more like pecs, but that too is intentional. Any muscular woman you see with big boobs has had implants. Boobs are fat tissue and when anyone gets ripped, the first thing that goes is the fat tissue, aka the pec-like boobs( unlike Dolly Parton). Again having her pecs/boobs squeezing out of the metal bra was done for humorous effect.

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    I also went with big hair on WW intentionally (ala Dolly Parton) to play up her Amazonian roots, again for humorous effect. This is what makes you feel like her eyes/nose are too far down.
    Actually it's the fact that her eyes and nose arent spaced like they should be. the bottom of the chin to the mouth,mouth to the nose, and nose to the eyes should be spaced roughly the same. As is now her head looks really small especially compared to bats which since she's so much bigger kinda makes it look weird. If you space the features out it should fix this problem.

    The nose thing I agree could be less flat, but I don't agree that they look like they are pushed up against glass.
    not so much WW but bats could use some nose. If you place a ruler at the edge of his facial features all but the very tip is in line with the rest of the features.
    -Tuefelkind

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    Nose Jobs!!!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by Tuefelkind View Post
    Actually it's the fact that her eyes and nose arent spaced like they should be. the bottom of the chin to the mouth,mouth to the nose, and nose to the eyes should be spaced roughly the same. As is now her head looks really small especially compared to bats which since she's so much bigger kinda makes it look weird. If you space the features out it should fix this problem.



    not so much WW but bats could use some nose. If you place a ruler at the edge of his facial features all but the very tip is in line with the rest of the features.

    Damn. I don't know why I fight it! I went back to play with your suggestion and it looks tons better, I think.

    Thanks!


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    Rolls Eyes Boob job

    All right Devil Child, you were right about the noses.
    Let's see what a boob job can do for our Amazonian!

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    WW looks more manly than Batman

    In my head im imagining Wondy sounding like Michael Clarke Duncan!

    On the drawing itself, Wondy's midsection area is looking a bit elongated.

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    lol funny caption. I agree on the musclar tone being a little more muscular then I imagine Wonder Woman. But she is strong. meh still funny. Everything else looks nicely done too.

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    I like Wonder Woman drawn powerful. I got no patience for the oversexed Playboy Playmate most horny comic artists draw.

    I think it's a perfect rendition.
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