hello i got the lineart from Chris Foulkes (http://daikkenaurora.deviantart.com/)
C&C is welcomed
i like it all, accept for her hair, naimly the blue side highlight, conciddering it also appears to be comming from behind her neck asweel
talking about hte blue light, under her raised arm it seems to be comming from directly under her arm, as her raised underarm has it, aswell as her torso hips and upper thigh...
looks good though man!
you are right (damn me :S) it's totally random
Changed it hope it looks better
If you see anything else please tell me
The lighting on the hair does look better on the revised one.
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yes much better man, on the hair, pardon the overpaint but its easyer to show what i mean c
the blueish arrows are your secondary light and its direction, the grey area circled in that color would be where that light would hit, and the red circles with an X is where you have highlights that otherwise would not exist or should not at least. the other comments are just that, thing that could be fixed, like the light on her cheek, your primary light is comming from the front right so her left cheek would get a bit more light(this is taken from the highlight on her breasts). Highlights on her hair means give it higlights, cut it out, whathave you,it just looks flat and draggs the peice down. The arrow with less means remove/lessen the highlight on that breast from the secondary, as it is completely almost tilted away from the secondary source... good job again though, hope this helps!
Thanks for taking the time i REALLY apreciatte it!
I see your point i will change it and see how it goes
once again thanks
Two things I can see that would help improve this image is:
#1 adding highlights, shadowing and maybe some strands in the hair because right now it looks more like a helmet rather than hair.
quick google examples:
in case pic doesn't show: http://dreamers.com/indices/imagenes...32.IMAGEN1.jpg
and
in case pic doesn't show:
http://www.brawnylads.com/hotties/kirsten/dunst-mj2.jpg
and #2 would be to add some darker shadowing to the left side (her right) of the neck because it looks waaaay too beafy as is.
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Thank you i will see what i can do
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