I hate benches.

[ThePaleMan]

Thanks for looking.

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[brendon]

that's super cool.

however, I was just wondering: if you hadn't made the title to this thread "I hate benches", then would I have realized what this picture is about?

yes, I would have, however, it would have taken me some time. Thus, I'm thinking it might be good to work on the bench a bit more... because it's only sillhouetted images, so somethings have to be expressed very clearly for non-artist folk to figure out.

but anyway, I thought that the whole hating of benches as a theme itself was really well portrayed by this huge dude tearing the hell out of this city park bench, hehe

[LanceITP]

Nice. Big heavily muscled guy ripping a bench in half. Though, the only thing that I find to be troubling is the amount of pieces the bench breaks into. I personally think it's a few too many.

Maybe you could add a "witness" in the background, like a child.

[vq3.0]

Wow, I like it, awesome sketch.

[ThePaleMan]

Spectators aren't a bad idea. A nice touch. It's a panel that falls between some stupid thugs watching him sitting on the bench, preparing to mug him, and him reeling the bench at them. It's supposed to be earlyy morning hours, so children might not be appropriate, but maybe a hamelss person or something could work.

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