Character Designs

**Mack** · 06-20-2006, 01:47 PM

Hey guys and gals, here are a few character desings for a comic idea. There are more in my sketch thread. Enjoy.
I re-drew the feet on the middle character.

**RavioliDog** · 06-20-2006, 08:30 PM

the fat guy in the middle looks like he's flying

**BlackFOOT** · 06-20-2006, 11:16 PM

These characters are cool but you need to fix the middle guy's feet by giving them weight (ie putting them flat on the ground) so hey doesn't look like he is floating. Otherwise all good

**Mack** · 06-21-2006, 07:55 AM

RavioliDog- i did that on purpose just for fun but nobody seems to like it. I'll change it and re-post. thanks

BlackFOOT-thanks, will do.

**makoi** · 06-21-2006, 11:42 AM

These look good. My crit would be that the characters look stiff. I know that they're only character design drawings, but if you add movement to the characters, they'll look even more dynamic. You definitely can draw, so I don't think that should be a problem for you.

**Maggott** · 06-30-2006, 01:34 PM

Good stuff. My only complaint would be with the left guy's jacket--the lines on the bottom are a little too straight, and the general flow of it seems off.

Other than that, excellent work.