Werewolf! Wip Beware!!

[comicbookartist]

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So I got my first paying gig in comics!!! WHOOHOO

Zenescope saw fit to to give me the job of doing 6 pin-ups for their forthcoming grimm's fairy tales graphic novel. Here is the red riding hood wolf.

I am still working on it....want to add some branches at the bottom and add some red.

Also wanted to thank everyone on the boards for all the crits. I don't think I would have gotten this job if you guys weren't helping me hone my skillz

[krikkit13]

Congrats on the gig! I like this so far, but I'd tone down the ears a bit - they're huge right now.

[Mr.Hades]

Sweet! Good news on the job!

I woulds suggest darkening down the left side of his face...leaving the eye illuminated. Also, the teeth on the top seem to be poking straight out. It looks a little off to me, but what the hey!

How about some drool?
More texture on the brown portions of his face, have it more 'pitted'?

[comicbookartist]

Had to make it reflect more of the story Put red in the pic....by far one of my most detailed pieces

[weirdow]

omg :P very awesome O_o very scary though XD i like it how the wolf is looking at me O_O :P big ears,big teeth, big eyes, big uhm... yes...wolf

[Beastie]

The technique and colouring are very impressive.

For me though, the oddly placed and randomly uneven teeth are 'irritating'.

I really want to get some dark paint and get rid of that big tooth on the extreme left of the picture!

It unsettles me when I look at the picture - and detracts from my enjoyment of an otherwise fantastic piece of work.

[comicbookartist]

THanks for compliments and crit guys.

The publisher signed off on teeth so no changes there

[haunted]

HOLY CRAP! That's awesome. My Mom liked it too. She said the wolf looks great and loves the detail in the background. I for one like the way you've done little red riding hood in there. harharhar she's looking good!

[alfred183]

She's wearing a hood?? hehe

Very nice! I agree with adding some drool in there.

[Yunni]

This is gorgeous! The detail is crazy-awesome, and I love the whole twisted maddness going on in the wolf. Those centered eyes really are a nice touch, has that 'those eyes are following me round the room!' feel to them. wonderful painting, luciously textured - congrats on the job!!