Some of the shading on her torso is a bit confusing and inconsistent. Its like your trying to stay faithful to the pencils and at the same time doing your own thing. It should be either or. The line weights are pretty nice, although you could transition them a bit more gradually. Like on the bottom of her right thigh and her left shoulder. They seem to abrubtly change from thick to thin for no apparant reason.
Over all I'd say a 3/5 on the Spidey scale.





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