Conan page

[Axel]

I wanna ink and color this, but i'd have to re-draw cuz i hate inked over blue-line, anyways whatcha think?

[Bryan E.Warner]

Hey Alex
I've always been a big fan of Conan.I see lots of good stuff here.My 2-cents would be.....be sure an keep your Camera angles moving.-( even just 1 panel ) Move it back-Birds-eye -Worms-eye-3/4 view-close-up! Remember it's your Comic-Movie,Your the Camera,Director.Crew,Ect.Take your time..Be the best you can be,Do the characters justice.( I think your doing well )
OK Keep that pencil busy!
Blessings.
Bryan E.Warner

[Axel]

thx! i got two more pages i wan to add to this and i'll definitely be playing with camera angles

[hardcore]

cool!
can't wait to see the rest

[ielle77]

looks great, my only bone to pick would be with the side view on bottom left. They both seem really really angular to me, but hey that could be what you're going for.

Otherwise, good job. Are you goin to ink this and color it too?

[acosby]

Bottom right panel. the big friendly eyes make him look like disney tarzan.
Otherwise I like it.
I like the first panel, if you are going for a hung over look than you have succeeded admirably.

[rubbertrunk]

Yeah i think some variety would be nice. I'm not really sure what's going on. panel1 he seems consternated and tired, panel2 he looks kind of bored not sure what to do, looking off the page. panel3 amazon chick comes out of nowhere staring at him. panel4 he stands up staring at each other, she's threatening him. panel5 he does look a bit sheepish and puppy dog eyed. I haven't seen the other pages but i felt this page doesn't really say much. I think a good rule of thumb for every panel or dialouge is that if it doesn't further the character development or plot development then git rid of it. You'd be suprised how many panels you get rid of when you ask your self the question everytime you think of a panel.