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    Spiral, Multi-taskin Machine!

    Spiral has always been hot to me so it was kinda hard to give her six friggin arms while maintaining her Sexy Factor. Tell me what ya think.

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    I like it, mostly because it's just so uncharacteristic. Very well done.

    My only crit is that the lower two arms look just a little too low. They should be raised a bit.

    Very nice work.
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    the hips seem to straight and narrow and the legs a tad to thin and stickly to me. on the go and go, though, its a nice image

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    I have to agree, though every one has their own idea what sexy is, i find teh hips to be extremely narrow, and teh legs to be very skinny. That of course may be teh way you envision Spiral, or how you want to draw women, but it really isnt the norm, in comics or in real life. that being said its pretty good execution and looks cool
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    You know, I really like this but I have to agree with the points brought up earlier. It also seems that you found three ways to avoid drawing hands.

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    Lol

    Man, everyone in this forum is into fat chicks. Now I got nothin against fat chicks, I love thick women. But I don't know where you guys are referencing your women. I'm having a hard time writting this without laughing, but for the sake of education. Will someone show me a fit superhero type with bigger legs than my spiral picture. They can be a real woman, or an illustration. Please show me what you mean.

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    well man, what can i say; the fact is those legs and hips arent consistent with known proportions for average athletic or even superhero proportion women




    notice on the last, the waist size is the same, but the hips and thighs have a noticeable difference in size.

    personally i wouldnt consider that chick fat, maybe you do, and of course its your perogative to draw in the style or to the ideal you like, im just sayin, thats not normal
    im not saying no woman like that exists, just that its not that common or normal
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    Phillup: This drawing sucks now feel free to send it to me

    Good work, I think all your straight hipped women give your drawing some unique...ness, though you might wanna mix it up from time to time to experiment with different body types.

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    I'll agree that the hips are a little narrow, but I think this is a very strong piece. The pose is expressive and an original depiction of the character. I really like it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phillup
    They've been tearing it apart over on Penciljack.
    That is why people post their art on Penciljack...to get help on spotting their weak areas within the artwork...if you are just looking to get your ass kissed, you've come to the wrong place.

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