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[Shawn Richter]

[obnoxiad]

I think your getting better with every page, and it's great to see you still at it!

Good job.

The top panel. The entire street being black leads into the car that's entirely black to the point you can't really distinguish them.

Panel 3 may be your best face yet. I thought it "looked" really good.

[VANDAL]

Not bad stuff,,however,,the inking in the middle of her face on panel four is all wrong. One good rule of inking to follow is to never ink something you dont have to. Every line should count, those that dont count should not be used.

[Bruce Lee]

Shawn,

I'll have some crits for you sometimes this weekend, I hope.

Loston

[Shawn Richter]

Obnoxiolad - Thanks. You know, all I can do is try...

Vabdal - heh, the rule I wa following was, "if in doubt, black it out..."

Loston - Looking forward to it!