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  1. 07-17-2005, 02:05 AM #1
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    "I SAID, look at my stuff........"

    Jus for fun
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  2. 07-17-2005, 02:07 AM #2
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    no I will NOT look at your stuff... wait



    D'ho!

    too late, since I looked at it and stuff--
    pretty kewl pic you Punk!!!

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  3. 07-17-2005, 04:08 AM #3
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    I've never been threatened by a man who has chicken bones for legs before.

    Its scary.
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  4. 07-17-2005, 08:27 AM #4
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    charming style. the page that touches the bottom of his shirt is mildly confusing, but you covered it with line weight.
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  5. 07-26-2005, 03:12 PM #5
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    Love the attitude.

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  6. 07-26-2005, 03:43 PM #6
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    good job. nothing really critical you can say. its pretty much all that it can be. little things: the shirts could have some better defined folds. develop the outer contour lines of your clothing, and dont just have a few inside lines simulate folds. if it's a man shirt, buttons are on the left--im reading them on the right. with such a cartoony style, the pose could have been more dynamic--like a dramatically arched back--more of a personal choice, i guess. nice.
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  7. 07-26-2005, 11:50 PM #7
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    Thanx everyone for peekin'.
    Jon Malin--much success on your book, it's been awhile since I've seen your work, looking forward to it.
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  8. 08-08-2005, 06:06 PM #8
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    Thanks man, I really appreciate that.

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  9. 08-08-2005, 06:19 PM #9
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    nice

    all I would change is mabye lifting the gun just a bit so it has some breathing room inbetween it and his sholder.
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  10. 08-17-2005, 08:47 AM #10
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    Sweet pose! Sweet pic! Nice Job!

    The hands are lacking tho'( they take away from the pic )

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