finished business

[amerkokh]

Hey guys, here's my finished pencils for a commission poster of a local story, Im not gonna color it so thought I'de show the finished pencils.
rock on

[Beastie]

Nice.

I take it the eyes are 'meant to be' looking in different directions?

Only thing I see 'wrong' is the fact that his hands are massively different sizes. The fingers on that lower hand are twice the width of the fingers on the upper hand.

[amerkokh]

yeah the eyes made to be different, but I dont c that much difference in the hand shape, its that both are in different pose, but thanks for the comment, will take it in consideration next time ;D

[penciljack]

Yeah, I see what Beastie is saying. The middle finger of the right hand is much, much larger than the middle finger of the left hand, even though they aren't that far away from each other, based on how you drew the rest of the body.

It'd work if you were using forced perspective, but the rest of the figure doesn't seem to carry it out.

[exultant801]

so sick of clowns but that facial structure is pretty sweet.