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Of course they can, Pep! Writer's will gladly pony up for your scribblin, I'm sure.
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Amadarwin's unauthorized, unscathing, unfinished biography.
Delirium Comic
By
Michael Shamblin
Elle – Demoness sent to seduce and guide the antichrist. Instead she falls in love with him, even though she has never been in love before. It scares her. As she loves the antichrist and knows what awaits him if he reaches his destiny, she decides that death would be kinder for him. She kills him and is now terrified of not only her boss, who is on his way, but she is terrified of her emotions. She is in love and anguished over losing him. Sad and frustrated that they couldn’t be together because of whom he was. She is near the demon equivalent of a nervous breakdown.
She is tall and blond. She is very attractive but not slutty. She has been created to compliment a powerful man that is destined to be a world leader. She is more of a power suit with a short skirt type in her current assignment and body.
Maurice – He is an Archduke of Hell. He is a general in Hell’s army. And befitting such, he is totally chaotic. He is easily excited and a loose cannon but is a contradiction in the fact that he wants to please his bosses and advance the cause of hell. The only one he shows respect for is Satan, whom he fears. He never misses a chance to be a smart-aleck.
He is tall and thin. His hair is short, spiked, and red. He wears a wife beater shirt with army or leather jackets. He wears jeans and cowboy boots. He has an Irish accent. He tries to look as punk as possible.
Atmosphere
the total comic would be contrasts of the dark world of the demons and the lightness of the angels. This part of the story is dark and woeful.
PAGE ONE
Takes place in a dark hotel room in a fancy hotel. It is nighttime and the only light is the lights of bright neon coming through the window.
PANEL 1
[LARGE PANEL] El is staring blankly at the rain outside. She is holding a cigarette in her nervous hand. She looks scared and worried as she stares outside.
[CAPTION]:
I’VE DONE IT.
[CAPTION]:
MY CAREER IS OVER. MY LIFE IS OVER.
PANEL 2
El is now sitting beside the large bed with her legs pulled up to her chest. She is still staring out into the room at nothing. We can now clearly see the antichrist dead on the bed beside her.
[CAPTION]:
HE IS DEAD. MY LOVER IS DEAD.
[CAPTION]:
THE ANTICHRIST IS DEAD.
PANEL 3
Close-up of Elle’s eye. A tear is streaking down her cheek smearing her eyeliner.
[CAPTION]:
I COULD NOT STAND TO SEE WHAT HE WOULD HAVE SUFFERED, HAD I LET HIM LIVE.
PANEL 4
Elle set up on edge as Maurice pounds at the door.
[CAPTION]:
AND THERE IS MY FATE AT THE DOOR, KNOCKING.
PANEL 5
Elle stands up in defiance. She is still shaky on her feet. But looks determined.
[CAPTION]:
AFTER THE LIFE I HAVE LIVED, I CANNOT GO QUIETLY WITHOUT A FIGHT.
PAGE TWO
[FULL PAGE, Splash Page] Maurice bust into the room with a huge smile and his arms in the air. He looks as if he is the life of the party that everyone has been waiting for.
MAURICE:
‘ELLO, ‘ELLO.
HOW’S EVERBODY DOIN’?
MAURICE:
HOW IS THE WORLD’S GREATEST DEMONESS?
HOW IS THE ANTICHRIST? COME HERE YOU OL’ BUGGER.
PAGE THREE
PANEL 1
He walks quickly with huge steps toward the dead antichrist.
MAURICE:
THERE YOU ARE.
PANEL 2
He looks at the body while smiling.
MAURICE:
I HATE TO WAKE HIM. HE’S SO PEACEFUL.
PANEL 3
[Close-up of his face] Realization dawns on him.
MAURICE:
LIKE A LITTLE ANGEL—
PANEL 4
[NEXT THREE PANELS NARROW AND QUICK] He looks at Elle.
PANEL 5
He looks at the antichrist.
PANEL 6
He looks back at Elle.
PAGE FOUR
PANEL 1
[Large Panel] He steps up to Elle, who isn’t backing down. He is glaring at her.
MAURICE:
HE’S DEAD. WHO WOULD DO SOMETHING THIS STUPID?
PANEL 2
She looks defiant.
ELLE:
I DID IT.
MAURICE:
I DON’T THINK I HEARD THAT RIGHT.
PANEL 3
Maurice grabs her and lifts her toward himself.
MAURICE:
YOU PONCE! WHY WOULD YOU KILL THE BLOODY ANTICHRIST?
ELLE:
I LOVED HIM. I THINK MY BODY MUST HAVE BEEN CONTAMINATED.
PANEL 4
He crams his hand into her chest. There is a magical light surrounding it to show that he did not shove it into her physical body.
MAURICE:
I PICKED THAT BODY. ARE YOU SAYING THAT I SCREWED UP.
MAURICE:
BECAUSE FROM WHERE I’M SITTING YOU LOOK LIKE THE UNLUCKY WHORE TO ME.
PANEL 5
He has pulled her demon body out of her human body. Her human body is falling towards the floor. Maurice is holding her demon body up. Her demon body is solid red with yellow eyes and mouth. She has horns.
MAURICE:
I’VE GOT TA CLEAN UP YOUR MESS. WELL TALK LATER.
NOW I’M SENDIN’ YOU BACK TO HELL THE HARD WAY.
PAGE FIVE
PANEL 1
[SMALL PANEL] Maurice is lifting her higher.
MAURICE:
HAPPY JOURNEYS, YOU STUPID BITCH!
PANEL 2
[SMALL PANEL] He is tossing her through the floor.
SOUND EFFECT:
[THUNNK]
PANEL 3
[LARGE PANEL] The landscape of hell with all its creatures can be seen. And from the rocky ceiling (Hell appears to be contained in a giant cave) we see a ball of fire streaking downward.
PANEL 4
We see the ball of fire close-up and can tell it is Elle.
ELLE:
[SCREAMING] ARRRGGGGHHH!!!
PANEL 5
We see the impact and explosion as she hits the craggy ground.
SOUND EFFECT:
[KA-CRACK]
Does anyone here have a sample script for a Marvel Infinite style digital comic?
Hey all, did this for a web comic my buddies and I are trying to get off the ground. This is only the first bit of a larger book. It's meant to be a little more adult. PG-13, no nudity outright, but suggested for sure.
One Last Job
JAKE – Shallow jerk, double timing smooth talker, and slick highly trainted thief. He speaks Japanese. You hate him. He’s the hero.
CHELSEA – one of JAKE’S girlfriends, she part of the youngest generation of the wealthy Chamberlain family. She’s too skinny and tends to wear expensive clothes that unfortunately remind her of her arrogant family. She seems to be attracted to shallow jerks like JAKE.
LILLIAN – very rich, not very classy, and definitely not very perceptive. She seems to be attracted to double timing smooth talkers like JAKE
PAGE ONE (SPLASH PAGE)
Panel 1. Running the height of the page we see an extremely modern/grand building from the ground cross corner view. The top floor reaching just under the top of the page. Corner penthouse. The SFX coming from the penthouse
SFX:
Ring Ring
CAP:
Chelsea Chamberlain’s penthouse condo. Saturday 10:12 AM
PAGE TWO
Panel 1. Interior bedroom is a beautiful room, designed for a modern girl becoming a woman (strange mix of what the decorator did versus what the owner had put up. From one side of the bed we see JAKE laid sideways, phone to ear.
JAKE
Hello.. yeah, that won't be a problem... 25 minutes,…I'll be there... I love you too, bye.
Panel 2. same basic shot, but now we see a woman is behind him. We only see an elegant arm wrapping around him, possibly part of her head.
CHELSEA
'I love you' huh?
JAKE
It's my mother…
Panel 3. Woman in full view a young girl late teens, early 20s arm, bead head, on her side, but leaning on her elbow. Right arm is now messing with her hair. JAKE now sitting up sheets just covering his groin, his arm censoring us from her nipples.
CHELSEA
Speaking of, my older-than-time great-grandfather is throwing that birthday party for himself tonight. It's his hundredth if you can believe it. You're still coming right?
JAKE
Of course, wouldn’t miss it for anything.
Panel 4 JAKE rises from the bed and begins dressing in the foreground as CHELSEA watches him from behind in the background. CHELSEA is now propped up on her hands; arms and torso making an A. Sunlight streams in from the foreground lighting her face, lense flair censoring her exposed nipple's.
CHELSEA
Do you have to go so soon? Stay with me….
JAKE
I have to go.
Panel 6. He is already out the door.
JAKE(from the hallway)
Goodbye.
Panel 7. Close up of CHELSEA’S face as she looks at the door. She looks confused and disappointed.
CHELSEA
Bye...
PAGE THREE (Six Panels)
Panel 1. (across top of page, very letter box): External cafe restaurant area, Noon. JAKE is in slack weekend clothes for a millionaire playboy. LILLIAN, in finer wear. Elegant relaxed, (Angelina Jole in a t-shirt). place is a calm busy. The diners all wear sunglasses, bright beautiful day. JAKE and LILLIAN sit at a rod iron table, white tablecloth. JAKE (left panel) leans back, LILLIAN (right panel) with a perfect, yet relaxed posture, taking a sip of water. One or both of JAKE’S arms are up in a faint shrug and he is smiling.
JAKE
... and that's how you get lost in the middle of Tokyo!
LILLIAN
Ha ha ha. I suppose you did pretty good for a 12 year old. Is that why you learned Japanese?
Panel 2. Same idea, but the camera is zooming in.
JAKE
No, that was years later; work related. That was the assignment that gave me the big break. No more cubicle for me. After I sealed the Japan deal I was pretty much flying after that. That was until..
LILLIAN
Till..Grace Falls?
JAKE (cont.)
Yeah. Job's almost done. I make the final deal tonight. After three years of work, it's almost over. Time for retirement.
Panel 3. half page left camera zoomed in: From Jake more serious face. Her face serious as well.
JAKE
So, have you given it any thought?
LILLIAN
I'm still thinking
JAKE
I want you to be sure.
LILLIAN
I'm not even sure how my folks would react.
Panel 4. An even closer close up of both JAKE and LILLIAN, both looking even more serious , sunglasses off
JAKE
I didn't ask your mother, I asked you. I love you not your mother. Don't let her keep you from being happy.
LILLIAN
I know… OK.
Panel 5. Extreme close up as JAKE and LILLIAN get very close together. Their face’s light up with wide smiles. The background softens to white/yellow hues as if in a dream.
JAKE
Yes?
LILLIAN
Yes!
Panel 6. Entire bottom of the page. Extreme zoom out matching the first panel. This time the scene in shadow. They are leaning over and kissing, but the darkness has obscured everything but an outline of them.
Yeah, I have a few:
- The Flash (preferably Wally West)
- Invincible
- Shazam
- Justice League or Avengers
- Fantastic Four
Anyone care to share a Marvel 3-5 pager script that I could use to submit my portfolio? I'll be very thankful and credit you for it! I'd prefer Hulk, wolverine, or X-men.
im gonna post a script , it will be based on justice league . im also gonna introduce a new character i have figured out a name for him yet but when i do ill let you guys know. im aldo gonna draw it and post as well
Looking forward to seeing it
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I just finished "Harvey's Question", when I get it scanned, I'll post it. Any chance of getting a Green Lantern script?
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