Sorry they're all posted long ways. I don't know why I compiled them that way.
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Working on a college campus is boring when school lets out for summer. As a means of dealing with the monotony of work this week, I started scanning doodles into Photoshop and assembling little comics. I didn't really put much effort in, so I probably shouldn't ask for critiques on the drawings. I guess what I'm looking for is if any of them are funny, and maybe worth refining?
[I didn't know where to post these, since they're sequential, but not at all a serious attempt at comics pages. If they need to be moved, please do so.]
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(Heh, just noticed a typo in that one)
Linked for inappropriate language that would make your mother sad if you ever used it so don't.
http://www.bombunists.com/comics/spacestrip2.jpg
Sorry they're all posted long ways. I don't know why I compiled them that way.
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Are you kidding me??? These are hillarious!!!
Pick up your newspaper and read "fox trot" or "Blondie"
It's all tired crap!!! Check out the King Features submission guidelines... 24 of these and you can submit your work for possible syndication...
I'm just saying... I would rather see this in my morning paper than what's there now...
And, no... I don't think they are too over the top or offensive or violent for the paper... some might, but I say give it a shot!
Theres a party at your house 'cause your mama is a stripper!
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I don't know if this is just my type of humor but these were hilarious!!! I love the unexpectedness of it all
Well done.
Eric
I can DRAW better than you!
That first one was brilliant.
Mister Walnuts!
Hahaha - that was great. I love absurdity.
Heh... some of those are really funny. I see a lot of bad strips, but you might have something with this. I kinda like that you don't have a "cast", it's just a series of short skit gags. I might suggest that you place the panels slightly closer together in even groups, to make them appear a bit more cohesive. I don't mind them being verticle... some newspaper strips are run that way, and the Japanese often layout their omake in the back of their OGNs in a vertical format.
I couldn't even make out the text in the linked one with the dude in bed and the space guy and... I dunno. But the rest were great. I love the last one, lol. Do more. Or die. The choice, is yours.
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