Reply With QuoteLooks pretty good overall. I think the water spouts could use the most work. They throw off the picture. I'd also like to see some sequentials. Keep it up.
hi everyone,
i'm looking to get some feedback on some illustrations. i'm more of a markers person but switching over to CG and trying to get some practice in before i have my cover due. the feeling of the comic is a modern day, average teenagers so i'm shooting for something nice, wholesome, down to earth and not too flashy but still eyegrabbing. any suggestions, especially colorwise is appreciated. thanks!
Looks pretty good overall. I think the water spouts could use the most work. They throw off the picture. I'd also like to see some sequentials. Keep it up.
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completely agreed. They look great.Originally Posted by Knigge
You've got a good feel for your backgrounds, just remember that water doesn't adhere to itself like that... that effect looks cool, but unnatural.
Keep up the good work and show us some more!
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Nice style, I like it.
thank you for your opinions. i did struggled with the water. i tried looking at photos of fountain water but had a hard time translating that into a cartoony drawing. do you have any more specific advice or example how to fix the water? i want to make it look better but also am afraid of having it stand out too much if it has too much detail/rendering.
http://www.koert.com/work/datafountain/fountain.jpg
the way i look at it, the water jets straight up, then the cascade down goes around the jet... if that makes any sense at all... ?
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