the wonder woman against justice 41

**swayvacious1** · 02-04-2005, 05:31 PM

i havent posted in a long time due to a controversy with my work in the past, but here you go this is going against justice 41, a challenge that will be seen.... an old wager between friends.

its a wip.

**Justice41** · 02-04-2005, 05:49 PM

I like this. I really like the yes. Makes her look young. I would change the legs a little. Right now it looks like her right leg is also part of her left leg. Git er done man.

**swayvacious1** · 02-04-2005, 06:01 PM

it does dosent it?....

**thepunisher** · 02-04-2005, 06:46 PM

Her hair is awesome. but there is just something that doesn't sit well with me in her eyes and nose. They look weird. You shouldn't be able to see under her nose that much with her head tilted at that angle.

her eyebrows are also scary. More evil Italian than Greek.

**Missle Man** · 02-06-2005, 06:28 PM

The nose and the cheek work if she is running into a glass wall, other than that it looks nice, push that nose down.

**Pencilero** · 02-06-2005, 06:46 PM

I like!

I'll attribute the face to your drawing style. It looks good as is, so I'd leave it be.

Where I would focus is on the torso and hips which don't seem to taper and be as prominent respectively. Her waist should be a bit thinner given the perspective, and her hips should flare a bit more. See also: Lynda Carter.

The arms and shoulders are quite nice, but the forearm and wrists should be thinned out slightly. I'm not saying "Dur, she has man arms!"; but she definitely has meaty wrists.

Keep up the good work. I'd love to see more.

Na razie,

Greg

**swayvacious1** · 02-06-2005, 09:30 PM

to every one thanks for the cc's they are much needed!

**uhduhduh!** · 02-07-2005, 09:56 PM

Her face looks unbelievably cool. At a glance she looks like she is in suspended animation if that makes sence. I guess it takes practice to fix that if you think that's a problem in this particular picture.