black and white pages of Bilaran Wars

[subcultured]

The full color version are in my page, but some critique of the inks and sequentials would be nice.

[bastien]

+i like you're style, it's unique and quite unlike most of the stuff we see around here

+the inks are nice and crisp while still conveying texture

-the word baloon on the bottom left of the first page (3rd pannel?) looks a little cluttered, being as it's over a figure's face, especially with all the white space around the main characters

[subcultured]

+thanks, they are an amaglation of the artists that i respect and my own style. joe mad, hughes, and dodson and the great inkers that ink them.

-you're right, it does look clutter. but i had to decide which part of the scene was more important to not put a bubble over them.

here's what they look like in color