dyanna and natalie

[ArtGyrl]

I don't really think of myself as much of an inker, but I want to get better, so I bought some new pens.

The first is Dyanna Star, a character created by my sister. I'm planning on using this for a t-shirt design.


Natalie Portman. It doesn't really look like her, but I still like how it came out. I was basically experimenting with inking, and almost gave up at one point. But I like how it came out.


Enjoy.

[KaRzA]

The first one is really clean... beautifull pic...
The second one is also very nice (the nose and the eyes are really good). Just two comments... i found the hand a bit flat and the feathering on the coat (left down) look a bit unfinished compared to the rest of the image...
Good work

[L1l' N]

Amazing clean lines man, damn that second one is AWESOME! I love them.








LN

[ArtGyrl]

KaRzA - about the first one. . .thanx. the second. . yeah, i see what you mean about the hand. I can probably fix it by adding a little shading to the lines. and the coat has an unfinished look, because it is kinda unfinished. I didn't want to draw the entire photo, but I wanted it to appear complete, so i tried to fade out the values a bit. it worked in most places

L1l'N - thanx so much.

[KaRzA]

I noticed you didn´t want to finish the coat... i was referring to the quality of the line you used to show it (near the finger)... they don´t look as fine as the lines you used on the face or the hair to fade out... that´s what i meant

[Ed]

omg..second one

[Finnegan]

i'm glad you didn't give up on the second one. i like them both alot.

i made a promise to myself a while ago. before i give up on a drawing (not a sketch tho ) i give it ten more minutes. after ten minutes, if i think it's still no use, i give it five more. after that... start something new


=BoB=

[ArtGyrl]

I noticed you didn´t want to finish the coat... i was referring to the quality of the line you used to show it (near the finger)... they don´t look as fine as the lines you used on the face or the hair to fade out... that´s what i meant

Thanx for clearing that up. But, I see what you mean about that line. Looking at it Now I think I should have brokent it up instead of making one straight thing.

[chris Chua]

cool stuff, dig that 2nd one especially. the 1st one is cool too, that empty white space in her hair(in the pony tail) bugs me a bit though-distracts from her face, I think.