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Dreams of a Different Kind
Dreams of a Different Kind
Brooke Thompson
Page One:
Panel 1 - This should be a panel that takes up 2/3 of the page, with the bottom reserved for the credits. Milton Casey lies in a wheat field. His eyes are closed, he is dreaming.
Milton (Caption): The worst of things can happen while you sleep. You never know what can happen as you lie, peacefully, in the darkness.
Page Two:
Panel 1 - Milton’s eyes open.
Milton (Caption): You live your dreams, things happen.
Panel 2 - He sits upright, and observes his new surroundings.
Milton (Caption): Things that you can never truly believe, but from these dreams, some of the best stories are birthed
Panel 3 - He spots a farmhouse in the distance.
Milton (Caption): This is one of them.
Panel 4 - He walks toward it.
Milton (Caption): My name is Milton Casey and this is a DREAM OF A DIFFERENT KIND.
Page Three:
Panel 1 - We are looking out a window, from inside the house.
Man 1 (Off Panel): We got a roach coming on board.
Man 2 (Off Panel): Let him come. We’ve ****ed with enough of them for today.
Man 1 (Off Panel): Come on MAN, he’s fresh meat. Untainted.
Panel 2 - Milton walks up the porch of the house. He scratches his head, confused.
Milton: Where the **** am I?
Panel 3 - Milton knocks on the door.
Milton: Hello? Anyone there?
Panel 4 - The door begins to crack open. An eye pearce through the darkness of the crack.
Eye: What do you want?
Page Four:
Panel 1 - Milton turns back, in the direction of the field, where he woke up.
Milton: I’m trying to figure out what the hell is going on. Last night I went to bed fine, and now I wake up in the middle of bumble****.
Eye: Watch your ****in’ language, boy.
Panel 2 - Focus on the crack in the doorway again.
Milton: I have no idea where here is and how I’m gonna get home to my wife.
Eye: A skinny twerp like you is married?
Milton: Well, fiance, but that’s not the point.
Panel 3 - Put the focus back on Milton.
Milton: Anyway, can you help me out?
Eye: Sure, **** face.
Panel 4 - Milton looks shocked as the door is opened.
Milton: What the **** is going on?
Page Five:
Panel 1 - We flip the point of view and see the pig-faced, Judas, standing in the doorway, smoking a cigarette.
Judas: What the **** do you want us to do?
Panel 2 - Milton doesn’t know what the hell to think of all this, it’s too much for him to digest at once, it seems to surreal.
Milton: I’m ****in’ trippin’ here.
Panel 3 - Judas stands there, looking like the bad-ass he is.
Judas: No, son. I assure you, this is quite real.
Panel 4 - Milton begins to run away.
Judas: Where you going, man? I thought you needed some help?
Milton: I’m dreaming. It’s cool. I’m just dreaming.
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