Hanging around

[Ryan Stegman]

Here's something that I posted a while back that got some crits that I had to fix. Outside of the ropes, which I just noticed, is there anything else to fix?

--Rydogg

[Ivan_Jarvis]

This is good.
I hope the oracle gave you good news.

[bindlestitch]

I don't know about fixing anything. This is really nicely done.





The oracle has spoken.

[Saturn Lad]

This looks really good. With such a complicated background, it can be hard to catch all of the tangents that appear when dropping a character on top of it. Her right leg is the most important to separate and bring forward, since it's the closest to us. Here's an overlay with some of the tangents and line-ups marked in red. Hope it helps.

[Ryan Stegman]

Thanks guys! And saturn, of course that helps! That helps lots!!!!!

[Aidon]

First of all: This is a friggin' great piece of work!

Secondly: If I had any critique at all, it's that I'm not very fond of the 'blocked" (?) background fill.

It's still kickin' a lot of our asses, though.

[timwellman]

Really nice... very Campbell-esque, who happens to be my favorite artist.

A great angle, too, slightly out of balance view to match the scene. Nice!

[ishmiel]

i agree about those stalagmites, or what ever you call the things hanging from the celling, i didn't even realize there were ones in the background and foreground at first glance.


the page is still pretty awesome though. very clean, easy to tell whats happening. good stuff

[Ryan Stegman]

Thanks, ishmiel.