I guess this would be lika a full issue of the story? like a #0 or a
-1 or something like that.
I like the story you're telling, and the mytological references in it are very acurate and give more depht to what you're telling.
what is strange to me is the change from the first to the second page, is a really hard change, looks like a diferent scene is starting or a side story, when it should flow
also and not related to the plot of the story you repeated two page numbers #4 and #8
would like to see more of this story