hi i'm new to pj i bring you hell-boy and abe

[KhroniK_jase]

hey guys........new guy here lol be gentle pleas

i been lurkin aroud for a while.......and when i herd of the hell-boy movie and saw those contest hell-girls so gotta drae my one i said to myelf.......my frends all said that my drawings rock hard so i want to the welth hear on pjack............ok ok enough outta me fr now lol


plz tell me waht u think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u rock or p-u??

[Johnny Blaque]

Hey, welcome to the harem know as the Penciljack forums!

As for the pic: u rock or p-u...I'd have to say the answer lies somewhere in between. There are anatomy and perspective problems that need ironing out but I think with continued posting here you'll get alot better. I do like the expressiveness on Hellboy's face though, looks sorta like one of those Rob Zombie, Rock demon type things.

[Akira X]

Uh...


Welcome to Penciljack.

[turkeyman]

Yeah the anatomy is messed up..and hellboy's stonefist only has 3 fingers . i like the faces though very expressive.

[Art of Drowning]

welcome to penciljack. How old are you?

[Ra Havok]

I suggest going through the basics of drawings. Like anatomy and stuff.

But yeah, welcome to Penciljack.

[Popninja]

Originally posted by Art of Drowning
How old are you?

His profile tells us that he's 24, which means brutal honesty won't be that crushing.

I'm not going to be to harsh, but I would like to say that some of us here take what we do very seriously. We strive daily to make ourselves better, with hard work and serious dedication.

If this isn't a mockery, you need to pick up some books on human anatomy and study them...hard. Log off your computer and learn to draw. Draw from life, from the things around you. I try not to consider anyone hopeless, but that's some pretty bad art.

[Spidey]

I don't really feel like talking or telling you whats wrong with your anatomy so hopefully this overdraw will help:

NOTE: My anatomy isnt perfect either but I'm sure its a step in the right direction.

[cory w.]

So, is there a punchline, or is this a really obscure one-liner?

Either way, it's funny as hell.

I commend you.

[MC Fumunda]

Originally posted by Fool Killer
So, is there a punchline, or is this a really obscure one-liner?

Either way, it's funny as hell.

I commend you.

That's what I'm torn with, I don't know if this is for real or not.

If it's a joke, it is pretty funny. If it's not, you really need to acquaint yourself with these characters a bit more.

Hellboy doesn't have goggles, those are the remainders of his broken off horns.

The way you've drawn his hands make it look like he's wearing gloves. His right hand is his "Right Hand of Doom" and is supposed to be much larger, made of stone, and has only three fingers and a thumb. He's got waaaay too many abs and his muscle anatomy doesn't really make sense. And the perspective on that gun is way off.

Abe is missing his gills (which Spidey pointed out) and has another load of anatomy issues.

Nice work on the bandaid, though.