He...really looks feminine(sp?). I guess it's the way you rendered the eyes and mouth(Looks sorta like he's wearing lipstick or something.)
another doodle from art history. i've never drawn anything this ugly on purpose. but gollum is such an appealing character, and images from the movie were stuck in my head, so i tried my hand at drawing him.
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renisanz01: i went to a new/different comic book store today. i got 5 new comic books for under $8, plus the guy even put them in those little archival bags
Arsonist 102: was it better?
renisanz01: yeah, considering the books i got cost $3 a piece, and one was $1.99
Arsonist 102: cuz he saw you and he was like "A g-g-girl in m-my comic shop!! omigosh!! will you marry m-- I mean please come again"
He...really looks feminine(sp?). I guess it's the way you rendered the eyes and mouth(Looks sorta like he's wearing lipstick or something.)
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wow. i wasn't expecting that reply. i don't think he looks feminine, but I did have trouble drawing his mouth.
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renisanz01: i went to a new/different comic book store today. i got 5 new comic books for under $8, plus the guy even put them in those little archival bags
Arsonist 102: was it better?
renisanz01: yeah, considering the books i got cost $3 a piece, and one was $1.99
Arsonist 102: cuz he saw you and he was like "A g-g-girl in m-my comic shop!! omigosh!! will you marry m-- I mean please come again"
lol, thats just good old unpredictable, explody, ole me.
The sketch looks pretty good considering...![]()
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for what it is worth, i thought that he looked a little more elfish. i thinkyou made his head a wee bit too round, and made his nose too small. he has a more sculpted and skeletal look to him. still, pretty good for doing it, i am sure, very quickly and not using reference. i like the x's on the fish's eyes. cute.
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This piece lacks the anatomy and life style of your girl renders. I think you should have taken on a better approach for the pose he is in. The picture looks ugly compared to your usual stuff, I dont mean to bag, but this is just an incredible downfall. I can see how its on line paper too, maybe its just a doodle
Dont take any of this too hard girl, its just crits.
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well. . .i did say it was a doodle. . .Originally posted by whoreable
This piece lacks the anatomy and life style of your girl renders. I think you should have taken on a better approach for the pose he is in. The picture looks ugly compared to your usual stuff, I dont mean to bag, but this is just an incredible downfall. I can see how its on line paper too, maybe its just a doodle
Dont take any of this too hard girl, its just crits.
people never read nowadays. . .and i also said that i've never drawn antying like this before ::sigh::![]()
thanx for the comments vinn. I don't know if i'll be attempting gollum in the future. probably will though.
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renisanz01: i went to a new/different comic book store today. i got 5 new comic books for under $8, plus the guy even put them in those little archival bags
Arsonist 102: was it better?
renisanz01: yeah, considering the books i got cost $3 a piece, and one was $1.99
Arsonist 102: cuz he saw you and he was like "A g-g-girl in m-my comic shop!! omigosh!! will you marry m-- I mean please come again"
I say you should attempt Gollum again and again for the very reason that maybe he didn't come out as well as you would've wanted this first time.
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