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    General Rattlor and Tomorrow is the Big Day

    Okay Folks as most of you know I am a huge He-man fan and i drew this inbetween pages for Shift a comic that I am currently working on for Writer Ryan Ruffatti. Oh yeah this drawing has nothing to do with SHiFT its of General Rattlor. Tomorrow is the day we debut Page number 1 of the comic as part of our free preview. Please sign up for our message boards and let me and Ryan know about!



    Here is the website adress and a preview pencil panel for the first page for SHiFT!

    http://www.angelfire.com/realm3/mank...ge-Preview.jpg
    http://www.hallopino.com/shift/


    Ram

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    well...
    His jaw looks a bit dislocated, the hadn holding the staff looks a bit smaal, its comming at ye, so it could be a bit bigger. I'm not really crazy about the other arm either, seems to be dangling at his side.

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    Thanks man! Noted and Noted!

    Ram

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    Jordy got pretty much what I was going to say, but I think General Rattler seems a littl stiff, Its probably the ink job, but thats all I got. hope that helped a little I guess
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