The second panel is just white text over a black background.
I don't understand what your asking. My aim is foxmerquise8 and my email is foxmerquisemc@yahoo.com if anyone else has questions.
Page 1 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none
Page 2 Pencils Mike Ink Mike Colors none
Page 3 Pencils Lyzander Ink Lyzander Colors none
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Page 9 Pencils Raede Ink none Colors none
Page 10 Pencils Solace Ink none Colors none
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Character Sheets
Hazuki - Raede
Ghost Rider - Raede
Hazuko - Mike
Zabato - Mike
Letterers - Paul Brain DeBerry
Last edited by foxmerquise8; 11-11-2003 at 07:22 PM.
I'll grab page 1 pencils and inks if that's okay. Any idea on deadline as I have to fit this in around work. As soon as Raede gets the style sheets done, I'll get cracking. If I have time, I might like to take page 3 as well if there are no takers...
Yeah, I'm not that good...
Ok, I'll put you down for both, although I need the character sheets for Zabato, Shinjuku, and Hazato still.
I'll do sheets for Hazuto and Zabato, if you'll have me on them.
"This job's not worth losing my job."
-Haziz - 40 Year-Old Virgin
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Please talk to me before you start the character sheets (and pages). My aim is foxmerquise8.
I will probably make the pages black and white (like magna) if no one joins for inking. But I'm really hoping for colr.
Script with corrections
Page 1
Splash Page, A shot of the ghost rider at a 3/4 angle. He is in traditional Japanese house at the time, which is burning around him. Rafters are falling, and one big rafter has fallen behind him and lies at an angle from for the floor to the roof.
Old Man Voice - In the Japanese mythos, there was once a legend of a great samurai who was killed by the most corrupt of men. Valiantly he fought, but no man can stop an army. When he died he was given a proper burial and something much greater, he was changed into the spirit of vengeance. Vengeance personified and set ablaze. Now the spirit wanders aimlessly, looking for....
Page 2
P1 - A small Japanese boy is lying in bed (one of those Japanese beds, that’s on the floor). An old man sits next to him, giving hand motions (implying he is talking). All this is being seen from outside a door (like the view of someone looking from a door).
Voice (coming from the door) - I told you not to tell him those ghost stories dad.
P2 - A horizontal box across the page
Text- Ten years later
P3 - A man is nailing a wooden sign to a tree (with Japanese letters on it, the sign should be longer vertical then it horizontal). The man is standing a stool to reach the place where he is nailing. A teenage boy is next to him.
Hazuki - Why are you putting that sign up dad?
Father - The government commissioned me to do a sign; they say it is to warn people about two assassins running about.
Hazuki - Assassins?
Father - They have already killed two government officials.
Page 3
P1 (Half the page, cut horizontal) - The scene is in a dark room at night. To the left of the panel Shinjuku is crouched on top of a tall bookcase, below him standing on the floor is Zabato with his sword out partially on fire. To the right of the panel a Japanese man in a business suit cowers in fear by his desk. Maybe a window and a door somewhere in the picture (if you do a window have some rain or lighting).
Shinjuku - You should have realized you were next in line.
Man in Suit- Why are you doing this.
Zabato - We are paid to assist your journey to the after life, although are employer has a far different reason.
Shinjuku - I hope you don't have that many relatives.
P2(Half of the space left, after the P1 was done, cut vertical) The man is slashed by Zabato's sword which is on fire, some dash lines on the picture (or whatever you guys use to show speed now a days. The man in the suit looks like he is in pain (make it look kind of exaggerated).
P3 (The rest of the space left) 3/4 view of Shinjuku with Zabato behind him (but not too close behind, maybe far enough back that you can at least see his legs).
Shinjuku - I guess we should make our way to the policeman general's house.
Page 4
P1 (1/3 of the page cut horizontally, now use 1/2 of the first cut vertical) Hazuki and his father walking toward a traditional Japanese house at the time. They are at the bottom of the stairs (there is only about 2 or 3 stairs). Somewhat dark and snowing.
P2 ( the other half of the first tier of boxes) The paper door opening.
Father- Be polite
P3 (the rest of the page) A bald old man sitting on the flood sipping on tea (sake?) in a room (traditional Japanese style room). Hazuki and his father are walking in the door.
Bald Man - Come in from the cold, oh I see you brought your son also.
Father- Yes
Bald Man- You didn't have to bring him this early in the morning, but now that he is here, he can see how business is done.
Father - I have urgent news, another government official has been killed and you could be next.
Bald Man - Don't be silly Hazato ... do you smell eggs?
Page 5
P1 ( 1/3 of the page cut vertically) The paper door of the house is being singed at the top; some of the door has already been burnt. You can see part of the floor in this shot too.
Voice - That’s not eggs, that is the smell of brimstone.
P2 (The rest of the page cut horizontally, the top) The bald man, the father, and Hazuki are standing and looking at the door in distress (which is now on halfway burnt diagonally revealing Zabato). The cup of tea is on the ground spilled.
P3 (The rest of the page) Zabato slashes the wall that the door is on in half
Page 6
P1 (1/3 of the page cut diagonally) Frontal view of Shinjuku face.
Shinjuku - Hello, gentlemen. I think you should say goodbye, to Mr. Tai
P2 (1/2 of the rest of the page, cut horizontal) A shot of the bald man, the father behind him. The room is starting to catch on fire.
Bald Man - What are you?
Voice - Your guide to the afterlife.
P3 (the rest of the page) Shinjuku throws ninja stars at the bald man and the father, the trail of the start is black and they go 3 through them.
Page 7
P1 (1/2 page cut in half vertically) Hazuki kneels and holds his father in his arms, with tears coming down his eyes. Blood is on the father's robe. The bald man is slumped over dead to the back of the picture.
Hazuki - Father!!!!!
Father- Run Hazuki, and protect the family ::last breath:;.
P2 (the rest of the page) Hazuki bursts through the paper wall (opposite to the one with the door on it)
Voice - How touching ::sniff:: if I wasn't evil I would be bawling right now.
Voice2 - Should we chase him?
Voice - Lets give him a head start, I want to have some fun.
Page 8
Splash Page - We see Hazuki from the back view ( at a distance, although distinct enough to tell its him). He is running toward a large forest (no leaves on the trees) and it is snowing. Above the forest is a fading imagine of head of the ghost rider.
Voice - And so the legend goes that he now looks aimlessly for someone with enough valor to house the spirit of vengeance. Engulfed in the flames of vengeance, which flare when innocent blood is spilled, Hazuki Tonguru, becomes justice taken form and given life. Riding a black horse with a mane of dying embers, he is the spirit of vengeance, the Ghost Rider.
Page 9
P1 (1/3 of the page cut vertically) Hazuki's body is on fire, and light is coming out of his eyes and mouth. His hands grabbing his head and he looks to be in intense pain
P2 (The second of the 1/3 page cut vertically) Part of Hazuki is in his clothes (the top) and the bottom is in the ghost rider costume. Same pose as the last panel.
P3 (The rest of the page) The ghost rider looking cool. Frontal view.
Page 10
P1 (1/2 of the page cut horizontal) Shinjuku and Zabato looking around. In the forest with trees around them and snow.
Shinjuku - That boy is resourceful; to bad we have to kill him.
Voice - Innocent blood has been spilled, vengeance will be served.
Shinjuku - Who is are? show yourself.
Voice - I am Vengeance'
P2 (The rest of the page) The ghost rider is standing in the forest with his sword drawn and he appears to be in an attacking stance. There is evidence in the trees a clash has taken place (broken branches and fallen trees.
Page 11
P1 (1/3 of the page cut horizontally) The faces of Shinjuku and Zabato, they don't look amused.
Shinjuku - Its nice, to meet you... um what was it, Vengeance? Sorry we have to kill you, but as you can see we are in a bit of a rush.
P2 (1/3 of page cut horizontally, under the first panel) Zabato is in the process of chopping down a tree. Its on a tilt (the tree) showing its in the process of falling.
P3 (1/2 of what is left of the page cut vertically) The ghost rider jumps you can see his from move up in the air and do a flip.
P4 (The rest of the page) Zabato's and Ghost Rider swords collide and create an explosion
Any ideas for the title of this. I was thinking Ghost Rider: Far East, but that sounds kinda cheezy.
here's the character sheet for hazuki.
and just in case that dissapears.....go here
i should have GR up by tommorrow at the latest. i'm hoping for tonight, but i've got to get some other stuff done first, so we'll see.
Nice work, although when I try to save it to my computer, it comes up as a text file.
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