Wow, I really like that! Clear storytelling, good characters, excelent facial expressions. . ! How far do you plan to go with this? I want to find out what the chimp is writing!
The only crit I have right now is that one page 1, panel 7 I think the shadow on the girl's nose is a little heavy.
Other than that, it's great!
Dude, do you have a webpage or something where I can check out more of your work??
Very SiP. I'd like to see more.
it’s as if he figured that sheer repetition would wear them down, forcing them to submit to his strange, incompetent genius.
Pummel: W 11 | L 5 | KO 8
I followed your images back to their directory at your host, Sidneymt, and I'm shocked that you didn't show us the other finished pages there!
The art and story has me hooked to where I want to know what they're saying now.
Are you the same person that was doing the Bikini Karate Babes comic book?
this is really good, specially like the expression on the womans face when she is crying.