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    Even more pages of "PANTS!"

    Even more pages of "Pants"!

    ... and here are the first ten pages if you missed them. PANTS


    page10

    page 11

    page 12
    Last edited by artronin9; 09-08-2003 at 10:21 PM.

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    page 13

    page 14

    Feel free to comment and all that fun stuff!

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    Captain Buzz-Kill TheFightingFoetus's Avatar
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    Haha! That is some cool stuff.

    You've obviously put a lot of energy into this, and it turned out well.

    Good luck with the rest of this.

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    very nice stuff,

    you got great style, the storytelling is good and the characters have life.

    i am really looking forward to read the rest of the story!
    so keep it on
    //we are just vaudevillians!
    And dont you ever forget that!

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    Everything looks and reads amazinly well. I didn't pay much attention to any problems in any panels because the story just moved me right along. Wonderful storytelling!!! Just watch the language. We wanna keep it PG-13 in here. We don't want any Mom's to ground their kids for looking up stuff on penciljack.

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    Attention to detail is really nice.

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    Puttin the hug in Thug since 2000! RavioliDog's Avatar
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    that first panel is just awesome
    ....pure awesomeness
    .....
    and the fact that the comic is called "pants"...
    man...thats awesome too
    this comic is way too awesome



    i need a thesaurus

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    Interesting story so far. You really did give Josh some life. The monkey, the kids. Theyre all great. Eddie is right, the stoy really flowed quite nicely.
    I also really like the way you split up the first 6 panels on page 14, nice touch.
    SB!FBTrMABP: 10W-11L-7K.O

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    Great story man! You really sucked me into the story, I can't wait to read more.
    The only question I have is where does it take place? Is he in an empty comic book store or is the kid just a serious basement boy, like the guy from Mallrats?

    --Reilly

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    If I had a .45 right now, no one would be left! nightfingers's Avatar
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    PANTSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !


    Good flow, nice pacing, you my friend are half way there.
    ‘There is a slower death/ bu-reau-crat/…….ruination/ mess up all that ambition and plannin’/ whisper in some ear/ -“You can’t do nothing to me”-/……-CLICK- ……/----whisper………in the right ear’----
    ---Avery Brooks---- A Man, Called Hawk

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