Reyven Hunt 4-Page Preview

**Blackthorne** · 08-15-2003, 11:14 AM

Well, here is part of what I submited to Image 3 weeks ago. Now all the guys who have been supporting Reyven Hunt and myself can actualy get a read.
Thanks for the support, everyone!!
Enjoy

-Ray

**Blackthorne** · 08-15-2003, 11:15 AM

**jeremy dale** · 08-15-2003, 11:24 AM

WoooOOOoooOOo! Thanks for the preview, Ray!

Wow, this looks tight-- in a couple of places it's hard to make out the lettering, but on the printed page it'll be bigger, and thus, easier to read.

As for a crit, the storytelling is very well done, as far as I see. The inking on page three is a little muddy in a few spots, but overall a good piece! My only concern is that all the negative space and blacks could possibly make it hard to make out what's going on in each panel-- but I only see that maybe once in these four pages.

Great job, keep it up!

Jeremy

**atom_basher** · 08-15-2003, 11:25 AM

well I speak for the people when i say that you deseerve the support

**Blackthorne** · 08-15-2003, 11:29 AM

Thanks guys..

Jeremy, the extra black on the sides were placed there by the letterer. It will be cut down whenever it gets printed for sure

-Ray

**Nerdface** · 08-15-2003, 01:31 PM

Ray,

This is absolutely beautiful!
If Image decides to publish this, I'm gonna bug the Dutch translator guys to print it here!

**eugene** · 08-15-2003, 06:18 PM

kudos hommie,this looks amazing good luck

-e

**Cuddly** · 08-15-2003, 08:52 PM

'sup Blackthorne!

I remember seeing that last page before when you posted it here and I remember thinking your art rocks.

Still think that.

I really like the artwork and your storytelling's pretty strong. My only real gripes are with the second page. Some of the shots aren't too clear and I had to look a while before I could figure out what was going on. Pulling back a bit to show more of the surroundings would have helped some. Pg2Pn1 is the weakest panel out of all 4 pages as I have no idea what's going on there.

The rest of this looks super sweet! Best of luck with Image!