Challengers page

[Raging Wiener]

this is page three of the Challengers artjam project. C & C wanted. Gracias.

I'm really happy with this in almost all regards. My own comments are under the pic.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/2677364/

[MightyMatt]

you might want to watch how you layout a page for smooth transition and flow. I am constantly jumping around and am not sure which panel is the first one to read, so on and so forth.
I do like the characters and your black and white composition on the page...I can just hope that some lettering can help out the flow of this nice looking page.

matt