Welcome Nirsus to thewritersdesk!!!!!
I will take a look at the script a bit later on when I am more awake! I didnt sleep well last night and I been bz all morning/day and now I am sitting in front of the PC, my brain at a standstill. So, to do your script justice, I shall return tomorrow refreshed and ready to c&c.
but I had to say hi and welcome anyway hehe!