Page 3 Solar Boarders

[-Rhemrev-]

Hey people,

Here's page 3 of my creator-owned project 'Solar Boarders', let me know what ya think....

In case ya missed out of page 1 and 2:

Page1: http://people.zeelandnet.nl/rhemrev/solarpage1.htm
Page2: http://people.zeelandnet.nl/rhemrev/solarpage2.htm

And page 3:


-Edwin
www.rhemrev.tk

[J(a)R(t)]

You with your backgrounds! I'm jealous...

This looks awesome, very profesional.

[Phil Clark]

Very nice, but I would get rid of the arrow pointing out the rider in the first panel establishing shot. If you have to use gimicks like that to point out story points, or important information, then you should rework the panel to better emphasize the action you want to show. And remember that since the characters are flying they can not only move in X and Y, but also in Z, so you can get more creative with the paths they are flying.

But the pencils are very strong. Nice work.

[jiseokjeong]

oh man, it's just too sweeT. I love it. Especially the page above. It just has clean introuducing feel to it. keep it coming man. you are sick!

[jeremy dale]

Nice all around! How long does it take to complete a given page? Just wondering... nice work!

Jeremy