Some sketches.

[Jetsin]

Here goes somemore stuff i plan on coloring soon( isnt that what I always so though) or whenever i get around to it.

[[TLG]_Spider-Wal]

Good stuff Keane,

the reflection in pic 1 is really good water-like and moody BG already. You Should ink it i wanna give it a go at colouring 2.
And the second pic is really good 2 exept i can't see no neck. anyway it's just as good as the first.

[astrocity20]

I don't feel like in either picture the head is the right proportion to the body or vice versa. Either way really good stuff. Good job.

[Jetsin]

okay thanks for the comments. But are the heads too small or too big.

[Popninja]

Too big in both, but more noticeably in the first one. You don't notice it so much in the second until you look at her shoulder in relation to her head.

I personally like the second one better than the first.

[Jetsin]

ahh yes i see what you are saying popninja. I never would have noticed that on my own. thanks for the help