The Maxx... first sketch for the draw-off

[Jordy]

well, My first Maxx try! Don't know if I'm gonna finish it, it's a bit dirty!

[Jordy]

C&C always welcome of course!

[MC Fumunda]

not bad!

definitly the Maxx...that's for sure.

you've got a cool pose going on here, and the lighting and shadows is well handled. i think if you cleaned it up, it'd be a great entry.

the only thing that stands out to me is his hand. i dunno, i'm not sure that i've ever seen his hand extended like that in the comic, so it just looks a little odd to me. i don't think that's what his hands look like. i don't think the claw is just one of his fingers, like the way you have it set up. but then again, i'm not exactly sure what to do to fix it....so it's kinda just a little nitpick/heads up.

great pic though.

good luck in the drawoff.

[Jordy]

2 MC Fumunda :well, I did a bit of research and he appeared in a Savage Dragon issue , his hand was posed a bit like this one!

Thanxs for the crits! Especialy the comment about the shadow, been wrestling with it a littel bit!

[cyspawn23]

dayum that ish is hot a hentai,hope u finish that ish,stay up!

[MC Fumunda]

Originally posted by cyspawn23
dayum that ish is hot a hentai,hope u finish that ish,stay up!

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yeah. what he said.

[jacon]

Originally posted by MC Fumunda
the only thing that stands out to me is his hand. i dunno, i'm not sure that i've ever seen his hand extended like that in the comic, so it just looks a little odd to me. i don't think that's what his hands look like. i don't think the claw is just one of his fingers, like the way you have it set up. but then again, i'm not exactly sure what to do to fix it....so it's kinda just a little nitpick/heads up.

the hand is cool... it totally works that way. that's why it was cool.... sam could put it on the cover and he'd be giving everybody the bird