heyhey!
Owkay, in order to get better at sequentials (drawing+coloring) I thought of this little story set a whole bunch of years before the story of my graphic novel* starts.
*to be completed in 2009
Please do tell me what you think of it. Whether or not you (dis)like the dialogue in some places, if there are spelling or grammatical mistakes, ...
thanks
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[..] = caption
°..° = computer (voice)
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[2058]
Zoom in on building, man enters his luxurious apartment.
°Incoming Call°
Mark Eason:
"Accept. Light 60%."
Nothing happens
"Light 60%!"
Garren: the caller , not visible
"Don't bother, Eason, I have control over your computer."
Mark Eason:
"What the hell?"
Eason tries to get out of his apartment
Garren:
"I locked your door. You can't run, nor can you communicate with the outside."
Garren:
"Mark Eason... Chief supervisor of the design effort of all class fours for the last 9 years.
Mark Eason:
"Who are you.. and what is it you want?"
Garren:
"Your killer. Your death."
Garren:
"Do you know 'Woon and Chihé', Eason?"
Mark Eason:
"Y-yes. It's a popular Chinese show for infants. I watched it once, together with my nephew."
Garren:
"Well good!"
Visible on the main screen of the apartment -> a quizprogram about Woon and Chihé.
Garren:
"There is an explosive device in your apartment. If you answer wrongly, it will go off. You have 10 seconds to answer a question."
°What is Chihé's favorite attribute?°
Mark Eason:
"A..a coca-cola bottle??"
°Correct! You are smart!°
°From what disease suffers Woon most?°
Mark Eason:
"... The flu?"
°Ooh, I'm afraid that's not right. The correct answer is: dysentery.°
Garren:
"Eason... I lied. There is not one explosive device in your apartment."
"There are 31".
Lights switch on, 31 bombs visible.
Tremendously big explosion follows.



Script for a short sequential. Input greatly appreciated.
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