Ha! That's great! At first I was like "damn, it's too wordy. I'll just comment on the layout and the art". But then I get to page 3 and notice a dispute and the lady attacking the clerk and I had to read it all. Funny story (and I can relate, I've had customers throw stuff at me before) and great art. The layout works, but for the amount of words in there, I'd have to say give it 6 pages for that sequence alone.