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  1. 04-21-2003, 04:01 PM #1
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    Thumbs down Spak Dexler Preview

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  2. 04-21-2003, 04:28 PM #2
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    Hey thats not bad. Looks good to me.
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  3. 04-21-2003, 04:58 PM #3
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    I dig it. The art's good and the story flows well, but I do have one crit.

    The dialogue of the Spax character smacks of The Tick. Not necessarily a bad thing, though.
    "....and if I die before I wake, I pray the Lord my internet history was cleaned out first."
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  4. 04-21-2003, 05:00 PM #4
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    Originally posted by UnsungGuru
    I dig it. The art's good and the story flows well, but I do have one crit.

    The dialogue of the Spax character smacks of The Tick. Not necessarily a bad thing, though.
    That's been one of the hardest things. I'm trying to make the character all grandiose and ridiculous w/o making him a tick ripoff.
    Thanks for the comments guys!
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