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Last edited by The Cancerman; 04-22-2003 at 07:22 PM.
Hey thats not bad. Looks good to me.
Loo loo loo I got some apples, Loo loo loo you got some too. Loo loo loo lets make some apple sauce, take off our clothes and Loo loo loo.
I dig it. The art's good and the story flows well, but I do have one crit.
The dialogue of the Spax character smacks of The Tick. Not necessarily a bad thing, though.
"....and if I die before I wake, I pray the Lord my internet history was cleaned out first."
That's been one of the hardest things. I'm trying to make the character all grandiose and ridiculous w/o making him a tick ripoff.Originally posted by UnsungGuru
I dig it. The art's good and the story flows well, but I do have one crit.
The dialogue of the Spax character smacks of The Tick. Not necessarily a bad thing, though.
Thanks for the comments guys!
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