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    Gearhead

    The next Parking Spaces story is up.

    If you don't know what I'm talking about-- check it out.


    It's called Gearhead

    Read it. Tell me what you think.

    Kimo
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    level boss [Moderator] Mase's Avatar
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    Good work Kimo. Great writing as usual. I'd like if the hand drawn pages and the photo pages used the same background color, to bring them together more. The ending seemed a bit abrupt, and there were a couple typos on page 4, but besides that it was a good read.
    I like what you're doing man - keep it up.
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    Typos....curses and curses again
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    ...nihil nisi bonum BenitoCereno's Avatar
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    I had no idea these things existed. I read them all, and enjoyed the same number as I read.

    Keep 'em coming.

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