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    Looking forward to see them in color!

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    Thanks, Bryan and Almayer. I'm really looking forward to finishing these pages and getting this issue out the door. We've got 6 issues total planned, so two more after this one!

    Penciled Page 16. Meanwhile, back at the castle...


    And page 17!

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    Getting better all the time, nice one. If i'm reading it well you need to lean the tombstone to the left in panel two, the black element is the tombstone right? You reversed the camera but kept the stone in the same angle. On the third panel is straight, maybe get it straight on the second panel ?
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    Ahh, busted!
    You're talking about the tombstone's position relative to the big Bone Demon? Cause yeah, it shifts 90 degrees between Panels 1 and 2. I was noticing that as I drew the last panel. It's important for it to be readable in Panel 1, so I might redraw the location of the Demon's arm in panel 1 to be consistent.

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    I'm not confused with the tombstone position and the shift from one panel to the next, but yes, the demon's arm should be relocated, I guess. Good job!

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    I like it! Readable and dinamic. Let's see what happens next!

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    Well... here's what happens next, Almayer! :-) Page 20.


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    why all heck is breaking loose...
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