Man, I used to LOVELOVELOVE Shooters blog - glad to see it's back. I bugged him for some crits ages ago and he ripped me up nicely. And I mean NICELY - it was weird - I was expecting to really get torn up but he pointed out both the good and bad and I used everything he gave me, same as I do from crits I get from everyone here at PJ.
Thanks for the link Paul! And, for the record, you're not "grumpy", you're just right.