Looks to me like his left leg (our right) is as thick as his waist is. That's very uncommon except in mega-bodybuilders... I think it looks odd.
His right, our left.
Basically, your rendering is throwing off what might or might not be issues in the base anatomy. As Keith mentions above, keep on that form before you get into the rendering. It still needs work, IMO.
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Looks to me like his left leg (our right) is as thick as his waist is. That's very uncommon except in mega-bodybuilders... I think it looks odd.
Any progress on this, Walril?
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Trying to come up with some Ideas for my first pummel.... this is gonna be tough
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Wow, that's quite ambitious!
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Thanks, I felt I needed to push my boundaries!
Yeah, hopefully I didn't bite off more than I can chew... the competitors are tough...
goodnite!
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Copper for me it seems clear that he's diving at the robot, but I could see how someone might also read it as him aiming for something just beyond it. Or that the robot is moving, and he's aiming for where its going to be; though, if that's what you're going for, I must say, the robot looks fairly static as it is.
@tudore: Thank you for your comments, it is a tough angle for me and out of my "comfort zone." So it helps to have someone else's eyes on it.
Last edited by CopperPop; 09-16-2012 at 12:46 PM.
Pummel Class: Middleweight Wins/Loss: 1/0 KO's:1
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Been a while since I posted, so alien and robot girl designs:
Since the ghost girl is nearly entirely human, all I need to do is get to work on the sequentials.
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