Flying hero sketch, C&C are wellcome

[Ol' ShellHead]

super flying man and a leg in the Bground. Wanted to hear some suggestions before I finish it.


here's the refined sketch:

[tudore]

It looks like those wings are slightly asymmetrical, and it seems like he has bodybuilder legs [visually impressive, but more of a hindrance than anything else.] As for his head, I'm not sure that much of the upper portion of his face should be visible at this angle, and more of the strain should be visible in his neck. The pose is strong, but not very interesting; perhaps you should bend one of the legs.

[Ol' ShellHead]

Thanks for the tips, goinig to refine it soon.

[Ol' ShellHead]

double post

[tudore]

Those boots look rather blocky: you may find these useful (actually posted in another thread.) Your calves also look a little low, the chest long, but I'm impressed by your speed.

[Ol' ShellHead]

Well I'm a student and happen to have some time for drawing during the breaks
thanks for the link, gonna look into it.