Drawing: Joker and Harley

[CopperPop]

Working on this for my personal weekly drawings. submitted for your approval....


i wanted harley to be holding a bomb, but haven't worked the kinks out of forward pinky side hand drawings yet.

C&C welcomed!

[Beastie]

Um.....the Joker has five fingers on his hand.

I'd stick with convention and give him just four fingers and a thumb

The angle at which the Joker's hand is appearing in shot would mean that his upper arm is far, far too long (his elbow would be just below his waist, by my estimation).

You need to be very clear whether the playing cards are in front of - or behind - Harley's hat. At the moment there's potential for a tangent.

Aside from that, I love the faces - especially Harley's. The smile is awesome.

[CopperPop]

Oh MY! I didn't realize that.... Thanks. I see all your points, and will adjust. Thanks for the critique.

[CopperPop]

updated....

[hydekomiksink]

I love harley's expression.

[Bruce Lee]

Harley is pretty much on the money, but the Joker could use a little work. You have a lot of tangents in the drawing that could easily be eradicated, and you really need to fix his hand. It's just not drawn very well. The fingers look a little flat and unnatural in the pose. With just a few minor tweaks though, this could be a very nice drawing.

[Mr. Nixon]

The Joker's far eyebrow is a little too high, which kind of make the perspective of the brow look slightly off. It needs to be lower than the eyebrow that is nearest the viewer since the head is tilted.

[CopperPop]

@hydekomiksink: Thank you!
@Bruce Lee: Agreed and thank you for the critique... pls explain the "tangents"
@Mr Nixon: You wouldn't lie to me now, Would you? Thank you.. critique noted

[CopperPop]

Update: Made the suggested changes thanks for the pointers and also, after having my bamboo tablet on the shelf for three years (trying to find a use) dusted it off and tried to ink this. This is the first time i tried to ink digitally.


im sure it could be better in more capable hands, just wanted to try it out.

[CopperPop]

Harley is pretty much on the money, but the Joker could use a little work. You have a lot of tangents in the drawing that could easily be eradicated, and you really need to fix his hand. It's just not drawn very well. The fingers look a little flat and unnatural in the pose. With just a few minor tweaks though, this could be a very nice drawing.

@ Logston, you never answered my question.... pls explain the "tangents"