Hows it going, this is my 1st script that I posted up on here and was hoping I could get some feedback for it. The reason for its sort of weird page count is that I want to put it up online and based upon Mark Waid's theory on web comics, the 1st part of the webcomic needs to establish the premise. I hope that this does that but I'm not quite sure.

http://colpryor2.webs.com/Wolf%27s%20Bane.pdf