Wolverine sketch need some pointers

**Dr. Strange Fate** · 07-29-2012, 07:56 PM

I'm working on this sketch. I'm going to post the steps as I complete it. Any help would be appreciated. Also I kind of took the pose of the upper body from a marvel vs capcom drawing.

**crazyjedichicken** · 07-30-2012, 02:34 AM

looks good but the hand with the claws extended looks huge! i think i remember that pose...is the hand with the claws meant to be coming at the viewer? if so you need to move the forearm and bicep/shoulder area so that its more behind the hand..if i knew how to do draw overs i would...
also move his left foot (our right) out further from his body, have it under or past the knee joint, it'll make him look more in balance i think! looking good!

**Dr. Strange Fate** · 07-30-2012, 07:16 AM

Thanks for the pointers does this look better?

**Silver Shadow** · 07-30-2012, 07:33 AM

looking good,
i would plant the upfront legs heel on the ground because now both of his heels are raised like a ballerina does.
maybe its only because its a sketch but it seems like you have difficulties with his arms muscles so i did an image google search for some reference for you:
https://www.google.co.il/search?um=1...1c.VMG6fosPh4I

**Dr. Strange Fate** · 07-30-2012, 11:26 AM

Thanks for the reference. Heres the inks, my inking has a strong Geof Darrow influence.

**stoat** · 07-30-2012, 11:55 AM

Hey dr.
Feet placement looking much better.reckon you now need to twist the torso in the direction wolvies looking.and bring his right shoulder closer in.

**crazyjedichicken** · 07-30-2012, 12:03 PM

also either change the angle of wolvies claws or the angle of the fist (i think the fist is the better option as the claws look great!) foot placement much improved!