The Goners #1 Page 1: Sequentials In-Progress

[fisherkingart]

Here's the first page of a new project Im working on. Obviously this is an in-progress piece, but don't be shy about critiquing it! Better that I get your advice now than when it is already done! My Blog.

[pell]

Looks good so far. Is this a horror comic?

[fisherkingart]

Sweet! Sort of. It's more like a supernatural, superhero comic with horror elements.

[stoat]

Really nice stuff,
nothing jumping out as an issue.love seeing pencils at this stage,

[plwoods]

Really nice layout there, good choice of camera angles too. looking forward to seeing more