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    New guy here. Los Avengers

    Greetings ladies and sirs. Ladies?... I'm new here and this is my first post so please, be gentle. This is a piece I've been working on over the past 2 days. It's not complete just yet but getting close. Just pencils on an 11X17 comic board. I'll start with the first shot of just a few characters and then adding the others in.

    1st shot. 5 characters down. Not feeling the Hulk, though.


    Added in Wolverine lighting up and Iron Man. Now I'm not feeling Iron Man AND Hulk.


    POOF!! Hulk and Iron Man gone...


    Quicksilver and new Hulk. Me gusta new Hulk.


    New Iron Man. Me gusta new Iron Man too.


    Latest pic. Added in Thor. Just need to add in some more details and clean everything up to get ready for ink.


    I realize that the Hulk is too big and his hand is REALLY HUGE but I'm okay with that. This is just for fun. If I broke any forum rules please holler. Thanks.

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    Neat. I like the Hulk back there with his Giant Hand. Reminds me of some of those older Comic Covers. The only thing that kinda bugs me is Wolverine's huge bicep.

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    When you aren't happy with it ... ERASE IT! spidey976's Avatar
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    This is a great piece... If I was to tweak a couple of things I may adjust IronMan head because right now he is aiming one way and looking another, and either Thors head seems to small or his hammer hand is to big.
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    Really nice piece, cant wait to see it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mental-Mouse View Post
    Neat. I like the Hulk back there with his Giant Hand. Reminds me of some of those older Comic Covers. The only thing that kinda bugs me is Wolverine's huge bicep.
    True. It looks like he's been juicing on the juice.
    Quote Originally Posted by spidey976 View Post
    This is a great piece... If I was to tweak a couple of things I may adjust IronMan head because right now he is aiming one way and looking another, and either Thors head seems to small or his hammer hand is to big.
    Good point. I think what I did was give him an angle where it looks like he's looking kinda out of the corner of his eye like a badass(like Wolverine is in this piece) but that didn't translate well with the helmet over his face, LOL.

    Quote Originally Posted by CopperPop View Post
    Really nice piece, cant wait to see it.
    Thanks.

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    hello, i'm allso new here...looking good, keep up the good work

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    It's cartoony...so it's hard to crit.

    Two biggest issues I see are Hawkeye's triceps flex right into the elbow, and Wolverine's flexed arm has both the bicep in a fully flexed pose and the tricep fully flexed with a horse-shoe at the same time. (not possible)

    Nice dynamic illustration. Any type of group shot is very difficult.
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    Really nice work. I just wish it was a nice, clean scan instead of a photo, but that's the breaks!

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    Forgive me if this is an intrusion, but I couldn't help myself. I wanted to see this peice in all its glory.



    (I'll take it down if you want me to).

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