Layouts for two Pages

[robozo]

please let me know what you think:

[stoat]

Hi Robozo
really like them,last panel really works in conveying what I'm reading as suddenly piqued interest.
nice work

[robozo]

Hi Robozo
really like them,last panel really works in conveying what I'm reading as suddenly piqued interest.
nice work

thanks mate, same to you!

[Caimano]

I really like the second page layout, I like the style and the expression and it's very clear what's going on...I don't understand page1 though, I mean, I see the same girl sleeping but a link between the page is missing... how she get awake?! I fell as something is missing in the storytelling

[yakemofv]

I really like the second page layout, I like the style and the expression and it's very clear what's going on...I don't understand page1 though, I mean, I see the same girl sleeping but a link between the page is missing... how she get awake?! I fell as something is missing in the storytelling

I agree! If the computer woke her up, you could draw a panel on the first page having her rise from the pillow and looking at the computer screen. Maybe it was an instant messenger sound? Hope you post the finished work. Lookin' good!