SF Brawl: TMNT Pages Redo!

[Hangman]

For this challenge we chose to redo at least 2 of the TMNT pages found here: http://www.penciljack.com/forum/show...quential/page2

Dan 3000











Hangman







metsuke







CrazyDiamond

[Furmanjon]

Hangman gets my vote here. A good variety of panels/shots, and the action is most clear/easy to follow. I liked some of Dan's lines but doing almost entirely the thin, page-wide panels is not the best way to go, in my opinion. Sometimes confused about what was happening.

Fun challenge, great job everyone.

[SRScribe]

I think Hangman's storytelling is more effective than Dan 3000s, but Dan's is finished and I dig his Triceraton more. Vote Dan. Excellent job everyone!

[Teratophile]

You guys didn't wait for me. Buncha savages.

[thEbrEEze]

I'm so bummed I couldn't be in this. Damn you life! Good showing by all. I'll still end up posting my pages soon.

[Dan 3000]

Great work eveyone, I took a completly differant approach to the challange than eveyone else but it was fun.

[Juggertha]

These deserve way more votes.

[Hangman]

you are right...*goes off to create more user names*

[shannonh]

Dan's has the best line work. Hangman has the best action (even with 1st page over rendered and 2nd under rendered). Metsuke has the most fun looking pages. And CrazyDiamond has the best homage to the original pages. But, once again, none of them beat the original.


In a case like this, I always go with fun. So metsuke gets my vote.

[Popninja]

Dan's has the best line work. Hangman has the best action (even with 1st page over rendered and 2nd under rendered). Metsuke has the most fun looking pages. And CrazyDiamond has the best homage to the original pages. But, once again, none of them beat the original.

Sad but true.

Too many tight shots in Dan's. Hangman, why would you pour so much into that first page and neglect the second one completely.

Metsuke really did have the most fun looking pages of the bunch. I really loved the action in CD's. I wish it was more complete.

I voted for Hangman ultimately. That first page rocks, even though the second one disappoints.