my god... i got an overlay from loston! all right! have to finish this up now! thank you all for all your help guys, will have this up by tomorrow at the latest! everyone of your comments is appreciated but i've learnt so much from Lostons' overlays of other peoples work, it's mind blowing to have it on my own stuff! thanks again!
Covie - funny you mention the 'animator plus' thing i only recently decided to go back to drawing like an animator (it's what i'm trained as!)
Though things are looking up....I still lead too the leg down springing up....It's me I know...so show case this...Make it enjoyable..
Except keep that pencil busy!
hope this is better! still really struggled with the left leg, his right. i had it done when my girlfriend pointed out it was way too short so just drew it longer, still not happy with it! cheers for all the comments guys! mr. warner i might draw it with the leg down as well just for you!
Spidey still has to have a collar bone (clavicle). Your traps only seem to disappear when arms are raised overhead. I would suggest reworking this pose from the ground up. Wire-frame - basic forms - muscles.
Dude I am assuming you saw the improved one??? It has some tiny traps lol
Not my best...but here is my input.
thanks dxdragon both for the comments and for taking the time to do out some poses! i can see what you mean but i had done this before i saw your post! will try and incorporate it in future!
Spidey- ha! tiny traps! sounds like a lame superhero! tinytraps to the rescue! with his side kick massive calves!